Friday, October 06, 2006

Linear Swirls

This is a shot that I took on my lunch hour earlier this summer. I like it, but I feel there's something that could be done to it to really make it pop. If you have any suggestions, I'm all ears. This is Jeanne Mance Ecole Secondaire (Secondary School, grades 6-9). The entire perimeter of the building is covered in artistic graffiti.

3 comments:

Zeke's, the Montreal Art Gallery said...

Howdy!

To me it strikes me that your upper left, and lower left make it less oomph-y. They introduce other very identifiable elements into the picture.

What happens when you crop it so that from the bottom there's no green bush? And from the left crop out five windows?

Hashi said...

Cool artwork. My suggestion for the photo - take it straight on. And get that word "Halo" (??) in a strategic position.

Frank said...

Thanks, Chris and Nance.

I'll try both of those suggestions and see what it looks like.